I can see from this image that my line work with ink and pen and on challenging surface such as acrylic paint needs work. As the textures of the acrylic paint is not all as smooth as a plain sheet of paper. The paint creates bumps and this widens the fountain of my pen and creates thicker lines when I didn’t necessary want them. Practice with illustrating other professionals use of materials such as acrylic and ink will hopefully teach me their movements and thinking that should teach me of experienced level of compositions and by breaking down the process I can exercise my skill and technicalities to translate into my own practice. I really do hope to change the opinion that my work is not commissionable/commercial quality yet. It is my ultimate goal to produce highly purchasable outcomes.